Comments : One Step at a Time

  • 17 years ago

    by pseudo

    I really enjoyed this poem! =) This is a very sweet piece and heartfelt..It really captures the moment and you did it very well! It made me smile =D! Great write. Keep it up ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    This can be read in so many ways, it's brilliant. Don't we all wish we had someone to support us like this? Or, don't we all have someone we need to be cautious with? Life is a dangerous but wonderful thing, and taking small steps is no guarentee you won't get hurt, but at least you learn a little from it first. A short and effective poem (which is usually the best kind). 5!