Dreams of darkness

Niice poem its really emotinal and good job expressing urself

This poem is realy nice , I wish you more good works like this. realy realistic job. good luck and also check my poem and correct me if iam mistaken

In the line waiting me to fall asleep.

Also for needs to be added

U mean Flames of fire correct it says fir. I also think it would flow better with saying "the hell" useing "hell" instead. otherwise great poem it deserves a higher rating.