EXCELLENT POEM!! It was really good. It flowed and rhymed perfectly. Your use of words were really good. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the great work! 5/5
Cayce

Very Deep i really liked keep on writing you should join a poetry club you would be great
Als

Wow Just wow, I loved it, the emotion within was outstanding. The flow was great, and the strucutre was as well. You are very talented, keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe