Aaww that's soo sweet, it's really cute! I'm soo glad you wrote this that's really nice and beautiful. I hope this kid with let you help him.... great job!!

This was a very sweet poem, for the most part the rhyme schene was good but here it seemed to be off

"You've had a messed up life
With your Dad leaving and all
But can't you try,
Try and be something more? "

... You might wanna look in to that, other than that your poem was great

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow! this poem is great! your friend is so lucky to have you as a friend!!=p!!

This is also a great poem! your a great writier so keep it up!
XoOx molly

Hey- i already comment on your poem but this is about your quotes- i was reading them and they are SO good. its just that i noticed that you use to be liek i use to be! i was so afraid to tell my best guy friend how i felt for him. people were telling me left and right to just ask him out. i waited 3 mounths and i still didnt. then finally i took peoples advie and asked him. he said yes right away and we have been dating ever since. sometimes best friends make the best boyfriends because htey already know so much about. like how to cheer you up, what your favorite things are like ice cream or candy, and also he knows just what do to for you to make you happy. i hope that helped. if it didnt im sorry i wasted 5 min. of your time lol.
XoOx molly

Wonderful!!! I loved it! It flowed very well and made a lot of sense! Thanks for the comments on my poems!
amandaXoX

Wow that is good better than mine! keep it up

Wow that is good better than mine! keep it up

This was a really good poem. A little sad. But it was good. Reminded me of a few things from the past. But I liked this one alot. So far your poems are really good. Keep it up!! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

I really liked the message of this poem, you're a great friend. You understood and gave advice to your friend in a beautiful way.

Great job! 5/5

Wow... thats all someone needs to here sometimes...that poem reminds me of well me... thats how i use to be.. great poem...keep the talent

This Poem Was Chalked Full Of Emotion. You Can Tell It Was Heartfelt But The Overall Structure And Quality Of The Poem Was Not That Great. The Rhyme Schem Was Very Inconsistant, Each Stanza Had Differnent Amount Of Syllables In The Lines.. Overally It Wasn't That Put Together..

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xxLauren33

I love this poem...I can tell your a good friend...

I love this poem...I can tell your a good friend...

I love this poem...I can tell your a good friend...

I love this poem...I can tell your a good friend...

Omg! wow! I'm stunned! That poem was so good! It was so meaningful and sweet! So much emotion was put into this. The rhyme and flow were excellent. Great Job! 5/5

"Your proud of detentions,"
you're, not 'your'
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"You've had a messed up life
With your Dad leaving and all
But can't you try,
Try and be something more? "
why didn't that stanza rhyme?
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Very touching poem, with a good amount of details and genuine emotion.

This is a wonderful poem.i'm not huge into god,but sadly i can relate a bit more to your friend.your poem made me think,and i thank you for that.beautiful work.-lexie

Gr8 gr8 gr8! loved it. u seem like a nice friend. u wanna b my friend? lol. 5/5