Great poem claire! Great start...I love it! x lizzie x

Very sweet! keep it up! 5/5
jessy

I love this poem so much one of my favouite on this site xxx

Short n sweet
keep writting
good luck

Great poem. keep writing ur a good poet. 5/5

Jay Jay

Great poem, I really like the rhythm you put in it. Keep up the good work.

-jason

Nice poem