It's amazing like Kerri said. Loved it, but not as much as I love you!
Lovce,
Heatherness

This is amazing! I really loved the structure. The lyrics were excellent, and flowed wonderfully. Keep Writing!

A-maze-ing.

of course. as are aaaaall of your poems.

:D:D:D:D

i really really really really really like this one. it's somewhat like every other poem you read. but then...it's not. it's completely different, and it draws the reader in and it made me thiiiiink.

I LOVE YOU!

Dang Chicka

Thats one funky style but wow it ... wow lol its so lame of me to say that but seriously thats a fanominal why of doing it

I love the ...grr I love it okay? simply enough this poem = the sexxxxxxx

Your rule baby doll

Cookie the hooker

Wow wow wow wow wow wow WOW
that was so awesome!!!
you are very talented!
i loved it!

ashes

This was awesome! It all flowed really well, And the rhyme scheme was also good. An awesome job overall. I'd love to hear it to music. 5/5

`taleee xx

AwEsOmE!1!1
That's Totally AwEsOmE
Luvz n keep writin
...mia...

Holly great, they was the best lyrics, i know i love most of the music you do so have ya seen the johny cash movie walk the line, get back to me on that one at my site. cheers

Wow! that was so dark, so poweful, so intense! excellent write! the way you used short lines really added to the dark affect of the poem and the descriptions were amazing! 5/5

Another good poem. 5/5