Comments : You Opened Your Own Door

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    D Ammmnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Wow. I loved that. GOD SARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I LOVE ALL YOUR POETRY!!!!! Insanely much.

    Like. I'm jealous. You should write your own frigging BOOK. Like WHOA!!! Amazing. Beautifully written and heartfelt. Just. Incredible.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    EllO darling!
    first of all your poem was so touching and heartfelt! lots of emotions inside..I'm into reading love poems nowadayz but sadly I'm unable to write anything!! your poem was inspiring and True..! I like the way you wrote it..makes me feel your strength ;)
    Keep it up hun
    and than-Q so much for your wonderful comments..they make up my day and you're sweet enough to force me to read ur sweet poems ;)
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x (Always waiting for more) XD

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Oh my God this is such a great poem. I absolutly loved it. It completely facinated me, because so much of it seemed like my own life.
    I ecpesially liked the part of:

    And now the table's turning
    I can't be here anymore
    No, I am not walking out on you
    You opened your own door

    That is exactly how i am feeling at this time, but i wasn`t able to express it as good as you. I also love the part of

    So now I will just take my leave
    Your games I have outgrown
    But if you had the guts to play
    Then you can make it on your own

    It was a totally great ending to this poem, and fitted it really well. Well all in all a great job. 5/5
    Keep it up;)