Its short but pulls me into it. This poem made me stop and think. Made me in a sorta "zone" It was great. Nice one. Check out mine sometime if you get the chance!

We are all dying
with every breath i take i can feel my heart crumbling.
this poem is touching.

*might try and check out the rest of yours later, i mean i'm kinda repeating myself abit, been sat here for hours!!!!!, anyways i'll keep to my promise.
peace.

**smile**