Wow. You said this wasn't good. I loved it. You really put your feelings out there. I loved this stanza;
"You left me here all alone
Dealing with this depression
Without you my slef-harm
became my main obsession"

Great job! && Keep it up =p 5/5

`taleee xx

Your poems are my inspiration!
you make me feel like I really wanna write sth like that, but at the same time I need to write something for my Bf!
don't worry, your poem was excellent.Its not the worst..not even bad! in fact I do like it..it reminds me of your other one "her picture"
Oh btw thanx so much for your comment*don't remember if I had thanked you or not* but anyway,meant alot to me! XD
Keep up the gr8 work!
Luv ya
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Brilliant poem hun! I really hope the other you comes back soon, cos you really dont deserve to keep punishing yourself in that way. Can relate to this poem so well, i like the way you've written it too, its unique. just wish you didnt have to feel so much pain though. keep writing ur great at it xx

O honey!!! noooooooooo go back to what u saw!! thats where u need to be!! u r too thin! u dont need to be any thinner! u r so beautiful! so perfect! please...c that this ed will make it all change into someone u dont like!! i love u! stay storng!...dont worry..this was a GREAT poem!!

p.s.
...um correctiong...i AM still w/ Eavn!!! im not playing w/ his amotions. i stayed w. em`...havnt broken up. like u said...i no what its like to be played w/...thats why i stayed :)

Hunni, i loved this poem, i liked the way u went from one point of view to another, its a great way to write it! especially when u think two different ways ! i love your poems, i've missed reading them ! missed u too! if u ever need to talk i'm always always here for you -xoxo- hayley

Aww.. I love this poem, and it really didn't make sense to me until I read your explanation & so I reread it & understood it. I loved all of it & I could definitely relate to it. Great job on this & Stay strong!!

This is so sad, and I am there with you, you are not the only one who feels this way, as I was reading this I could see myself, pretty pathetic for an old guy huh? I just wanted you to know you are not alone, Thanx, Timothy r

Wow, this is such a good poem that most everyone can relate to , i loved it.. but in the third stanza you accidently put "slef harm" instead of "self harm" just thought you might wanna look into that.. sorry bout correcting you.. anyways excellent poem 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Hi, I really liked your poem, especially because I've felt like that...sometimes I feel and see myself fat, but people tell me I'm thin, and everything's confusing.
I also think that the description of your reflection, and how you feel about it, tells a lot about how you feel inside, and what you think about yourself. Well done!

Great job. 5/5

You said this wasnt good & we might not get it well I got it when I read it and it left my mouth wide open in awe!!! This is one of my favorites now.

Wow so beautifully written dont put your poems down i loved it

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

I love it. i felt same when my lover left me. great poem 5/5

I love it. i felt same when my lover left me. great poem 5/5

Oh, I thought you meant that you missed someone else and that that person had left u a note or something saying that you'd gotten skinny ... oh well with explanation is a good poem :D

Sabrina hunni, it's a good poem like all your work. It brought tears to my eyes because I care about you so much. i'm not doing so well myself. i'm so depressed just lately. I'll email you tomorrow after work :)

Good job. man, your poems are always so sad but full of emotion. they're really good in there own way! nice. 5/5 once again

I loved it, all your poems are aweosme because there unique and there from you.
keep writing my friend
xxxxxxxx

Thats really deep and powerful. I like how you told it in two different perspectives of yourself-That really made it unique. Amazing write--Stay Strong-- 5/5