I CAN SOMEWHAT RELATE TO YOUR POEM....TRUTH IS REALLY SPOKEN OUT IN YOUR WORDS...NEVER QUIT..ROCK ON!!!

Intersting poem. Never seen one writtten like this, I guess that is a good thing. hehe. Great work though I enjoyed reading it. You have much talent.

*Julie*

Ya know what? I am pretty sure the MSN message boxes grow to an infinite amount. So remember there is always space there =)

strong poem, gives you a sense of what you are going through and how you are feeling at that time.

Really powerful stuff. The poem has a really great feel to it and I really enjoyed reading it, the idea that the words are slipping away, forgotten and running out of paper is just so true and so well expressed. Brilliant stuff, 5/5 x

Wow that was amazing and very suspensful nice poem maybe u can read one of mine 5/5

There are not enough blank {pages}
for you to spill your words;
vomit of humiliation
shame and regrets,
sadness beyond recognition
the page is getting smaller.

Black ink filled every crevice
but you’re not done yet,
there is still so much more to say
words you’ve never spoken loud
just whispered in ink
across your heart.

Desperation
you need more space
the walls are covered
not an inch spared
for you to place
your blood, your ink.

The words pound in your head
poetry overload- headache
scream in frustration
words are slipping fast
vanished to a forgotten
place in your heart.

Never recovered,
the words of your soul
leaving, gone, dead
your scrambling with
aching, sweating fingers
to recover every word

Every line, but its lost
the paper is filled
yet still unfinished

Very imaginative, full of imagery yet to me the words are feeling hollow. I don’t know where you were going with this poem. Other then no matter how many words you throw out, none of them were the right ones, to describe the way you were feeling right? This:

Black ink filled every crevice
but you’re not done yet,
there is still so much more to say
words you’ve never spoken loud
just whispered in ink
across your heart.

Is brilliant. You really do have a way with words you just need to play to your strengths a bit better. Keep it up, and keep pouring your soul into your work, it’s a different style then mine and I respect it, but at the same time it becomes a critical obstacle in editing it because I don’t know the emotions well enough. Only you do. So remember they’re all suggestions.

Wow. This is amazing. Great Piece of poetry here Hunny.

Wow hun you never fail to suprise me. This poem was fantastic. It was very nicely written. I miss alllll the other poems you had up, but anyway. Great work.

I very much enjoyed this poem. I love how you described words as "whispered ink". :)