Comments : Goodbye (this is for you honey)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    Very beautiful, love is a very hard emotion to deal with, but you will make it through, friends are there to support you and there is a man out there for you, just don't shut him out because you are trying to get over a love that wasn't even there.

    But amazing poem, I have been through the same thing, and poetry is amazing. You have amazing talent, so keep writing, I am looking foward to reading more of your writing.

    Lia Jnell

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow, your typo's don't seem that important anymore, if portugease (sp?) is your first language then you're doing an excellent job at this!
    I liked this poem because although it started off with a bittersweet feeling, it also held a note of hope
    well done on this piece
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    First of all. This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted! I like the emotions running in the poem, The title captured my eyes. before I even read it - I know that you wrote this from your heart. Good job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow, That was really good. I love the rhyming scheme. But it's a very awesome poem you're a great writer.