Nice poem

Ooh. This poem is really good, everything is a question until the last stanza, and then instead of answering htose questions, it just tries to make the reader forget them. Nice job

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A very good poem. you keep astonishing me by your pen.

all the best

It's a nice poem... Emotionally strong and well written... Good work!

Very sad poem poem. It was a great poem aswell. You used excellent vocab in this piece. I really liked the third stanza alot. I can relate to it so much. You've done really good on this poem aswell. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Well it was very sad, the last stanza's rhyming pattern changed up, and wasn't all in the right flow. but none the less it was a good poem!!!

-Chanelle-

Thats weird im listenin 2 a song called that..:P anyway, wow great poem! great wording, it really brought power to the poem! 5/5