Awe I think this is one of your best poems! It's so unique how you explained each feeling other than the usual cliche "Emotions all over the place" You sat and storted them out into a wonderful poem! I Loved it 5/5 Keep writting hon and as always I'll keep reading!

I liked this one but I think it was abit too literal for me, sometimes to add a little more flair to your work try and find a better way of expressing your feelings in a more figurative way....still it was well structured and there was much thought behind it. Ace!

[lost_laureate - come find me]

One is anxiety,
My stomach
Is tied in a knot
It feels as if
All my fears
Have joined together
And tied themselves
So tight
They will never let go..
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I loved that stanza. Very powerfull. I'm still awake, Cause I can't get to sleep. So I thought id do some more of your poems. Buuuuuut, Yesh, I did like this one. Thought tis was brillant. 5/5

`taleeee xx

Awh, great Write Jessy, it flows and the rythym worked for the poem. I thought it was a little diffrent adn creative so extra thumbs up to you on that. :)

Aww, i really loved this poem, it was perfect. well done
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keep writing my friend
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Aww.. Hunn, I can relate. It's possibly one of the worst things ever. I'm glad you chose to write about it instead of bottling it up. =)

I know, those emotions get the best of us, and we never know how we should react. A really good poem, I can relate.