Very nice!

Nice work .. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

It's a really good poem, but it kinda drags on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on...etc?

I remember how I felt on the day of my prom I couldn't wait to go to my first dance with my boyfriend at the time, it was some of the most agonising hours of my life.
I think you did well to write about the anticipation, it kind of seems like a story in a poem too, I like that style.
I think you may have to edit the poem though because you have some strange characters in the middle of words like "wonâ??t ."
I enjoyed this very much.