Simple but i like it well done keep up the good work mate. Feel free to check out some of my stuff too ay. :)

I really love it! even though it is kinda sad. Keep up the exellent work, Pete!

Awesome. pure awesome. great job, sounds like u really put alot of thought into it. keep it up

The poem is great.. and wat i like about it is that its short.. but it holds alotta meaning .. well done

I agree with Crazy Beautiful!!! It was short but full of meaning!!! I Loved it 5/5!!

This is sad but sweet i like it, although it makes me think of a past experience of mine

I really injoyed your poem! keep writting

Great poem... short, with a lot of meaning to it, keep uo the great work...
~Reanne~

I also agree with crazy beautiful i loved it. it's really really touching. keep up the good workxxx

Nicely done....love it!!!

please comment and rate some of my poems:)

That waz so good i feel ur pain u should keep writing it a natrual born talent ok stick with it

Heylo love great poem.. it was very creative and true. please comment on one of mine xx

I really like it is really good and i can relate

LOVE IT def. 5/5 for this one it is a great poem that i definetly can relate to

Hey,the poem was really good,great job-katie

I really like it, i think its amazing, gr8 effort
6/5 =P

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Great job I think you are a very good writter!!

This poem wuz great......although it wuz sad and reminded me of sum pplz in my past but anywayz keep up da gud work.

Hey its a really good poem plz check out some of my work thankz

Really good it remindes me of how i feel about my gf. Really good man