Rain

by Brittany Hampson   May 12, 2006


When the rain falls
all is so quit
no birds are singing.

when the rain falls
watering all the plants
running down the leaves.

when the rain falls
it is so peaceful
no children are crying.

when the rain falls
the world is coming back to life
everything is alive and healthy.

when the rain falls
my dreams come true
to be kissed in the falling rain
to be held and picked up by my true love.

dreams come true
in the rain
or at least mine do...

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  • 19 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    All is so quit
    ((quiet))
    no children are crying.
    ((I loved this line...))

    Great poem about nature... I don't know, but I could just tell it was written by you because of the way the it was written..which is a good thing... Nothing much to say here, either.. I really enjoyed it. That's it. =]

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. Excellent write. 5/5

    when the rain falls
    my dreams come true
    to be kissed in the falling rain
    to be held and picked up by my true love.

    Loved that part. Mmhm.

    xx.Nohting-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

  • 19 years ago

    by awww

    Nice one... i like the last stanza... i felt it...

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hmm, that was very interesting. I liked it very much. Nice job. I hope to read more.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    I love this! The rain is such a beautiful thing and you've expressed that well here=)

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