This is good.

Good rhythm. keep it up

Wow that was fair good! u've got a way with words.. keep up the great work chikky xxx

I Love it ! Definitly 5/5 Keep it up!

Damn this poem is so good...i love what u have to say..a girl has to do what she has to do right..:P

Hahahhahaaaa thats good!!! girl!! you worked that! 5/5!