Really nice poem William!
Will check out your other poems:)
And thank you so much for your nice comments. Great start for a newbie (me)

Hey great job!! I liked the format you put it in!! Keep up the good work.

O geese! u r VERY talented!! nice work!!

ps...towards ur comment...yeah it was from myspace :)

Straight from the heart, yes, thats exactly where it came from. Excellent piece. Take care. 5/5

Cute 8-)

-emma