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This is a song I wrote that my girlfriend seems to think is more of a poem, and i think it sucks, so her it is, of course slightly modified...

Flames are kicking back
Her jealousy and anger begin to stir
My tears begin to flow
The song in the backround begins to blur
I say change it, it sucks
I hear her words enter my ears
"Because we always do what you want"
Like a radio, I hear the sarcasm loud and clear

[chorus]
It was the knock out punch
I'm not getting up from this
Could have been so much worse
I'm glad I know when to call it quits

Drive the dagger deeper in me
Leave me a bloody mess
I'm leaving you an open target
Aim for the bullseye on my chest
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Back to my feet for the second round
"Talk to me" I hear her say
My chance to end the fighting
My chance to make this a better day
But jealousy and anger return
My chance of success is less
More questions and accusations
Tragedy strikes in the form of a hole in the chest

[chours]

Depression follows my responses
Who feels it most, who feels the burning tears
We're both victims of sorrow's fountain
I can tell through her sad stares
She's been speaking her mind all night
I want to speak mine too
I've been wanting to say this all night
"I love you"

It was the knock out punch
She's not getting up from this
I'm not letting it get worse
I'll lift her up and give her a kiss

Watching her lying next to me
Hold her tight, give her my heart
I love you forever and always
Til death do us part