I knwo how you felt in this poem the same way i feel now

Awe I felt like this at the beginning of the year... I like the poem because of the wording and because I can relate. My only idea's for your poem are that you don't get carried away with discriptive words.... It throws the flow of the poem off

Well, that poem was good and it was true, and real. because many people give there parthner's/boyfreiends second chances when they shouldnt but only because of the love they have for them.
it was good, keep it up

This poem was good but should've been longer. But, yeah, hey I felt the same way like all freshman year (I'm soph now, gonna be a junior June 6th, 12:00 p.m. :D )

I know exactly how it feels...i am absolutely in love with this guy...and I just keep getting my heart broken and then a month later he'll call and of course i give him another chance and we try again only to get my heart broken....but i may be stupid...but I love him