Thank you Denise for your comments on my poems,Holly told me you put me on your profile but please stop building me up, im trying to keep a low profile these days..lmao! good luck on the site. Thanx, Timothy r

This is a nice and short poem. I liked it. I am looking forward to seeing more work from you. Welcome to the site. And best of luck in everything you do.

Peace, Joe

Well Deanise firstly thank you so much for your comment sweetie. You have a beautiful way of writing this poem really is beautiful I reqlly hope you write more soon...it definetly deserves a 5.

This is a short and nice poem. Wonderfully writtem. Hope to read more of your poems!

This poem was short but it was actually pretty good. Usually when I tell people that I also say how I rarely do say that about another person's poetry. The lines seemed to flow well and the pieces just seemed to fit. The only part I had trouble with was this one:
Open myself and let it all out
Fall in love and begin to shout
And maybe that was because of the word shout. But other than that great poem. Hoping you'll post more in the future.

Simply beautiful penned, though short, but flowed well yet great ended, beautiful done! keep them coming, have a great weekend, take care. bert

Its interesting how you start out not really rhyming... but you fall into rhymes in the middle... like your developing your own technique... i love it!!! Dont let anyone tell you your poems arent good enough... because i've read many famous/published poems and the 2 you have on here are well beyond some of the ones ive read... i think you could easily get published if you tried hard enough. Keep up the great work... 5/5 -Jen-
PS. Im adding you to my favorites

Nice job! you really are a good writer! I love ALL of your poems so far! wow, keep going, it will take you far!

Beautiful. Sounds like you've made your voice.