P0werful lines in this piece very well written. g0od j0b keep it up

This is great. i loved it.

Jab pyar nahi mangte,tab pyar diya jatha hai...Jab pyar ko mangte,dard diya jatha hai...jab dard nahi mangte,maut diya jatha hai...Jab maut nahi mangte,ek naya payar aur zindagi diya jatha hai...
I guess thats how the principle of god is....kissi ke milne se Pyar ki jeet nahi hoti...Kissi ko zindagi mein pyar karna hi ek jeet hai...So you are already victorious in life...take care and keep smiling always...

Good, poem, its a very good kind of different.

This is so nice! Very deep... thoughtful... A very well written poem!

Excellent

Hey awesome poem:) I really like it. by the way thx for the comment on my poem, ment lotz.

VanessA

Very well written.. keep it up

Nicely written, some powerful messages in this
5/5
*Gem*

Jaan I love u very much.
If I do any thing for you,
I will destroy life of some good people.
I am helpless. Other wise I can change this world only for u.

oh ma god... its amazing... .

and you know what is called true love.. your answer is from your poems one stanza is here

I everyday worship for god only
for your happiness.
one day god may listen my prayer.
He will be make u happiest person in this world.

Very good pome.. thanks for the comment on mine...

Loving. I have picked two ROSES from your bunch of flowers(from your poem):
"I always would like to remain you
in my heart."
"Jaan I love u very much."

Really nice, that was such a beautiful poem for someone you love, your feelings were showed clearly, loved the read, 5/5 :)

I don't know what to say....it appeared to me as if you are talking about my experience, my life...every inch of it I could relate to myself.

I don't know what to say....it appeared to me as if you are talking about my experience, my life...every inch of it I could relate to myself.

Nice poem