OMG!!! how fantastic!!!!!!!!
I love it I just love it
the last stanza was SO SO nice!
awesome work huni!
I wish you the love of the world!
your poems always mean something to me!
I luv you hun
Ahhh, so breathtaking penned, Life is too short but sweet, very simple as the mind could conceive But with love...it becomes sweeter... From someone who truly cares...beautiful done myfriend, keep smiling and take care, bert.
Wow! Very powerful. I can really relate to a lot of this, especially the lines: "I try to walk forward, but keep looking behind, how can I move on when all I think about is you" And i liked the stanza about the rose, and your opening stanza. Very beautiful, brilliantly written. I loved it. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the great work!
your poem reminded me mine" Your rose". they all share the same theme in which time suddenly stops at one time. wish it gets many 5/5 bcoz it does deserve esp this line it touched me."How can I move on when all I think about is you'
You blew me away with this poem. breathtaking is the only word to discribe it! Amazing poem, I loved every word. It was very emotional and it's imagery was perfect. It felt as if I were right there flipping through those pages! Good job, i want to read more!