OMG!!! how fantastic!!!!!!!!
I love it I just love it
the last stanza was SO SO nice!
awesome work huni!
I wish you the love of the world!
your poems always mean something to me!
I luv you hun
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Wow.. just wow. Left me speechless.

I love how you compare you love with him, with that rose. I love that part.
Brings a moment of silence in the poem.

It was a very enjoyable read. Very beautifully written.

Absolutely fantastic.

Lotsaaaa love
-xxx-

Somewhere in my mind I lost all sense of time
I try to walk forward but I keep looking behind
How can I move on when all I think about is you
Leaving you behind is something I can't do

this is really an breath taking stanza, loved the complete poem and i m glad that u posted this one.
u r the best... :o))

all the best and take care
5/5

Soo beautiful...its such a touching piece..great work
5/5
;)

Ahhh, so breathtaking penned, Life is too short but sweet, very simple as the mind could conceive But with love...it becomes sweeter... From someone who truly cares...beautiful done myfriend, keep smiling and take care, bert.

Wow that was so beautiful. i luv reding ur w0rk. a heartfet piece beautifully w0rded and i l0ved the heading 0f it. keep em c0ming

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

So heart touching this poem is....
You can feel the yearning for the love "that once was" throughout the entire write .
Wonderfully written with so much emotion .

Wow! Very powerful. I can really relate to a lot of this, especially the lines: "I try to walk forward, but keep looking behind, how can I move on when all I think about is you" And i liked the stanza about the rose, and your opening stanza. Very beautiful, brilliantly written. I loved it. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the great work!
-Ashley-

Amazing words I love it and I know just how this feels keep up the great job 5/5

I loved the fact that you put so much emotion in your poem. 5/5

I think the poem is a little unbalanced. Work on that.

//Deary///,
your poem reminded me mine" Your rose". they all share the same theme in which time suddenly stops at one time. wish it gets many 5/5 bcoz it does deserve esp this line it touched me."How can I move on when all I think about is you'

love

That was a great poem.

That was a great poem.

Michelle,
This was absolutely amazing I loved it. You wrote it so well it was as if I was rite there. Def a 5/5.
God Bless
Renee

Wonderdful write Michelle, superbly penned!!!

Good work.
There is a rose in between the pages
It's the very first rose you ever gave me
Our love is just like this rose
Dried out without love and care
But its existence I can still see

I special like these lines of your poem.

You blew me away with this poem. breathtaking is the only word to discribe it! Amazing poem, I loved every word. It was very emotional and it's imagery was perfect. It felt as if I were right there flipping through those pages! Good job, i want to read more!

xox Tiffany

Absolutley amazing poem! Keep it up.
Debs

I LOVE YOUR POEM