Comments : A Book of Memory

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    OMG!!! how fantastic!!!!!!!!
    I love it I just love it
    the last stanza was SO SO nice!
    awesome work huni!
    I wish you the love of the world!
    your poems always mean something to me!
    I luv you hun
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 15 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow.. just wow. Left me speechless.

    I love how you compare you love with him, with that rose. I love that part.
    Brings a moment of silence in the poem.

    It was a very enjoyable read. Very beautifully written.

    Absolutely fantastic.

    Lotsaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Somewhere in my mind I lost all sense of time
    I try to walk forward but I keep looking behind
    How can I move on when all I think about is you
    Leaving you behind is something I can't do

    this is really an breath taking stanza, loved the complete poem and i m glad that u posted this one.
    u r the best... :o))

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    Soo beautiful...its such a touching piece..great work
    5/5
    ;)

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Ahhh, so breathtaking penned, Life is too short but sweet, very simple as the mind could conceive But with love...it becomes sweeter... From someone who truly cares...beautiful done myfriend, keep smiling and take care, bert.

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Wow that was so beautiful. i luv reding ur w0rk. a heartfet piece beautifully w0rded and i l0ved the heading 0f it. keep em c0ming

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    So heart touching this poem is....
    You can feel the yearning for the love "that once was" throughout the entire write .
    Wonderfully written with so much emotion .

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow! Very powerful. I can really relate to a lot of this, especially the lines: "I try to walk forward, but keep looking behind, how can I move on when all I think about is you" And i liked the stanza about the rose, and your opening stanza. Very beautiful, brilliantly written. I loved it. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the great work!
    -Ashley-

  • 15 years ago

    by Tammi

    Amazing words I love it and I know just how this feels keep up the great job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Katherine

    I loved the fact that you put so much emotion in your poem. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Catherine

    I think the poem is a little unbalanced. Work on that.

  • 15 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    //Deary///,
    your poem reminded me mine" Your rose". they all share the same theme in which time suddenly stops at one time. wish it gets many 5/5 bcoz it does deserve esp this line it touched me."How can I move on when all I think about is you'

    love

  • 15 years ago

    by dijah

    That was a great poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by dijah

    That was a great poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Michelle,
    This was absolutely amazing I loved it. You wrote it so well it was as if I was rite there. Def a 5/5.
    God Bless
    Renee

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderdful write Michelle, superbly penned!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Good work.
    There is a rose in between the pages
    It's the very first rose you ever gave me
    Our love is just like this rose
    Dried out without love and care
    But its existence I can still see

    I special like these lines of your poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by tiffany

    You blew me away with this poem. breathtaking is the only word to discribe it! Amazing poem, I loved every word. It was very emotional and it's imagery was perfect. It felt as if I were right there flipping through those pages! Good job, i want to read more!

    xox Tiffany

  • 15 years ago

    by debbie

    Absolutley amazing poem! Keep it up.
    Debs

  • 15 years ago

    by TightGrip

    I LOVE YOUR POEM