Good one:) you got the emotion across well. XxX

I can totally relate! You really have talent! And the emotions are really strong! ^_^

I know how this feels, this brought me back... and I'm so sorry you have to feel that way.... but, why are you looking in from the outside? Look from the inside out. Meaning don't try to see what others see, just see what you want to see. All those people are not going to be there in the real world. Focus on your future goals and don't let them get in your way... Look forward and never look back.

Wow great poem thats how i feel...keep writing ~desi~