Not bad i like the idea behind
the whole "cut to you bleed, and nothing more" is a good concept
since i'm a cutter i relate to it!

Hey, nice poem. i am also a cutter but on your profile it said cutting is one of the only way to deal with things? how does it deal with anything?? i write and cut to get my pain and anger out. i like your poems though, ive read two. if you have any time, check out mine plz.