Ohh hunni, sooo so sad and heartbreaking, I know where your pain is coming from and I know how tough life can be sis, but stay with us, I ned you more than you will ever know...You give me strenght to move on and live my life...You are my Angel and I would die without you...If you go, I go..

I love you lil sis - Sabrina

Quite good story tellin. really sad but i couldnt stop readin

Aww jenni that makes me CRY lol i nevea cry too i can RELLY relate to

Thats so terribly sad
try to stay strong
i know lifes hard
but death is even harder
lots of love darling
xxxx

Wow really realistic and dramatic, i wanted to stop reading cause it was so sad, but you had me hooked, keep writing your talented and read one of mine if you find time

great job

Stephanie

I cant tell u in words how much i love ur poems 5/5

So sad an makes a serious impact. so emotional. excellent, well done.
thnks for the comment.
let me knw what u think of the rest of my stuff n i'l be sure to return the favour.
x

Whoa, that was deep and very very heartbreaking, but i thought well written.