The tragity,
good poem,
smiple and easy to read
enjoyed.

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Hey, got your comment, did like your poem.
very good

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VERY good poem. sad but happy. liked it:)

I live it alot keep writing

It was really good! i hope i get to read more of your poems!

AWWWW THATS SO CUTE!!!
TRUE?

Keep writing u go far some day

Wow good.. is it tru

Hey mr mr, it was good, tru and full of emotion, i liked it. and your teacher mrs smith is gr8 for encourging you dude, make it mre meaning full by extending you lines a bit, i no you can do it.

I love her,
but she hate me.

But she will always,
be my mom

I loved that part! This poem is so sad...=[ Chim up, m'dear. **5/5**

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Lolli.xx

Wow that was really good. you have real talent dont stop writing =)
Cc

Your poem was pretty good. keep it up
Dee

Sounds like ur life is rough :-\....

I love that...my mom get stoned too

Oh that is so sad.but its agood poem.

Aw.......i love this poem and your so sweet...

Wow this is my faveriote one i loved it the first stanza was superb it caught my eye and made me read more much more lol
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That was very deep yet good, very good.

Aww that was very sad hun
i loved this one it is my faveroute one of yours (well out of them both anyway) ill give u 5/5 hun u worked alot on this one xoxoryxox

That poem is soooo sad..... its soo sweet...keep up da good work!