Comments : Incredibly bad poem. In need of a title.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*JOKER*~

    THIS POEM IS AWSOME!......

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    WH-HOA! *SLiiy Biznotch* FINALLY made a comeback and showed us a new poem! LOL! I love you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oh :O -gasps- Is..Is.. This a new poem? Ooh! Yay!! Taha. I thought it was very very good indeed. Yesh I did. So don't say its bad =[ cause it's not okay. But I really liked how you said 'open' 'closed' just like that, by themselves. Really made it powerful.
    Awesome job Brittnayy! =P Taha. Keep writing more damn it =] Talk to you later. Love me. xx.
    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark

    -poke- haha I poked u.

    lol you actualy wrote a poem.. it wasn't bad! sheesh! u just think it is when it's not! grr! lol

    good job =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Haunting? or Death? hmm... well, it needs a good title because it's actually very good... how about... umm...

    "Illusion or Reality?"

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Behind My Mind

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Title..
    Such sentences, Wonna go fora long title?
    Opening Closed doors?
    Lmfao.
    Sucks.
    Never mind.
    Great poem tho.
    Quick and mysterious!
    Sexual.
    =]
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    That poem doesn't deserve a title.

  • 17 years ago

    by .+.unpretty_loser.+.

    Beatiful poem.
    that's all i can say coz it's too good for words.
    love jess xo