Here without you

by the wonderful me   May 16, 2006


I need you now more than ever, but i cant get to you.
if i call your name will you listen,
if you hear could you help me,
its hard for me to go on with out you here,
but im making it on my own.

I wonder if the day i will see you again is near,
why couldnt God see that i would need you here with me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Silently Crying =[

    I love your poem! I think its great! And it doesnt need to rhyme. And miss thing up there at the top needs to check her own grammar. And learn how to spell grammar while she's at it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catherine

    It's actually a pretty poor poem, no offense. I think you could try balencing it out a little better. For example, to me...it just seems like it is the kinda poem that would rhyme. And the name 'Here Without You' doesn't really seem to fit. And check your grammer.

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