Aww. This is cute but sad. Really great job! Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Aww i loved it...5/5 good job

Hey Steven,
My names Paige, firstly, i LOVED this poem! It really touched me! And i know exactly how your feeling! I went through the exact same thing actually not to long ago! Its not a very good feeling! And i can tell you i absolutely hated feeling that pain! I dont exactly know your situation! But i do know that all you need to do is to stay strong! No-one can control their heart! And tell it who they can/cant love! You obviously love your girlfriend! Because if you didnt you wouldnt be with her! But its also clear that you still love this other girl! Im not telling you what to do or anything! Because in the end its all up to you to follow your heart! But i think that you really need to sit alone and think about who you really want to be with, and how she will affect your life! You can either be with this other girl and basically start a new life! Or you can stay with your girlfriend and continue with the life your in now! Personally, i think you should stay with your girlfriend! Because obviously you love her! Because if you didnt! You wouldnt be with her! You'd be with the other girl, or someone else!
But like i said before! Its not up to me to tell you what to do and who to choose!
Because it IS all up to you! And im sure you will make the right choise! Which ever choise it is!
Please comment on my poems! Id really appreciate it! And it would mean alot to me!
Keep ^ the amazing work!
Love Paige
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Well hun i know what you mean by this one here! i am going through this and it isn't all that great... its hard to be like this and if its meant to be it will happen! : ) so be cheerryyy!!

You have to stay with your gf young man! you love her and ... well, i know how it goes
you fantasize about someone else who you are infatuated with... everything your loved one says seems like the other one is saying it to you... in you mind... it's crazy
i love it though... it's so true, and many people can relate.