Wow, gore yet awesome! I love the ways you've rhymed it all and the metaphores!
Jen

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That was so good...I am running out of things to say about your poems because they are all so amazing...you are a brilliant writer. Keep it
5/5

Breanna

I cant think of waht to say-it is more brillant than any words can mean-absolutely loved it!-use your talent :]