I liked the first one but this one went by too quick! still loved it tho!

I like this one better,it flows better,it's omogeneous.Especially the lats verses,they sound so ....so....I guess I can't find the right word,I might say hopeful,but it's not exactly what I mean.You deserve a 5 here.

I really like the rhyming in this one. and int part 1.

I liked this part too, you are very talented. I thought the flow was a little off in some places, but apart from that, it was very good.

This was a very good ending but its sad that she has someone else and they cant be the couple they want to be because of that it was a great poem your a great writer keep it up