Comments : Sunset In Motion

  • 16 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    "I gladly accept the night's gentle kiss"
    I LOVE this line. I love the whole poem. It's amazingly written!
    I share your appreciation for sunsets. They truly are God's gift =)
    Keep up the good work and take care!
    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wow! amazing! beautiful, vivid imagery. I especially like the first stanza where you have personified the sun.

    wonderful reading your work again.

    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Beautiful language, you're writing is very well crafted! No critisim, I can't find anything wrong with it. Great description, very vivid and alive. An excellent piece, keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    Thats cool how you wrote it 5/5
    great !

  • 15 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #5:
    Oooh! Very cool! Very serene feel to this one. Great job!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nicely penned form with beautiful imagery. Great job!