This was really good! Fav part;
"I ask these questions in hope you might realize,
The answers you seek and the freedom you need,
Is not buried under your sleeve."

This was an awesome poem. There were a few mistakes in there I think though, But still an awesome job! Keep it up 5/5

`taleeee xx

It was very good
but unless youve experenced cutting
please dont talk about it this way
i know its not a good thing
and i doenst really help
but its a hard thing to deal with
my best friend slit his wrists
and died
good job anyways
xxxx

Your writing is amazing i wish i could write like that i havnt been writing lately i wish i had more time to