Great peice, not sure why it has such a low rating... maybe people are being picky as it does not rhyme and is relitivly short. but i think it is very good, it flows well and though it is short it also has much depth.

btw there is a site error you may like to edit

A little bit too short, but very nice and with a purpose!
4/5

UZI! baby! how are you?! Ice Ice Baby! Love your poem..so sad tho. stupid chick broke your heart, i'll go and break her jaw ;). haha. i miss you so much! love your poems baby cakess. keep them up. love you lotss. xoxox