Nice poem very sweet but sad at the same time if you get what i mean. keep it up

This is short, but lovely all the same. It's very moving and direct. Write more like this and you'll do well. x

It's short but still is very nice..it's toughtful and has a touch of sadness..very nice all around though

I like it. Short but sweet. It flows well and makes alot of sense. Good Job.

That is soo short, and yet...sooo effective! someone else wrote a poem like this, *not the same topic, but the same style* and i have exactly the same thing to say to you that i said to him, leaves so much to the imagination, and yet strong enuf to leave an impression

It is short but it has alot of emotion put in to it keep writing ~silent eyes~

Aww sad yet short. gr8 work 5/5 u told me to comment him but i did so ill pik a dif. one

This is so short but definately meaningful. i like it keep it up

The most beautifully chosen words, that you could probably say about anyone.

This is short, but still holds a lot of emotion. It is beautifully written and powerful. It takes a lot of talent to write such a short piece but have it be so deep! Great write! 5/5

My Computer Dosen't Let Me Comment On Friendship Poems Because It Needs To Be Seriously Restored, But I Must Say That Your Poetry Club Is Severly Talanted...& I Admire Your Talent & Skill For Being Able To Right a "Epitaph" I Suck At Them 5/5
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

WOW!! you got it goin girl!!!

5's all round from me.
short and sweet.

It's different very original.
that would be why i love it
~Emma

Wow...even though this is so short...it says SO much...i loved it...5/5.

Awwwww.. this was so sadd! i've done one of these too.. this was beautiful and full of love.. the emotion was clear and brought a tear to my eyes..

now has went to heaven for eternal life.
^ i think it would be better if you replaced "went" with "gone"

wonderful job! 5/5

Short sad and great that it is and oh powerful great one

geneross

Wow that was so short but it had alot of meaning and thought good job loved it

Beautiful!