Wow. i really like that, it pretty trippy (that a good thing....)

So sad, but very well written.. I love the creativity and what unique imagery...

"Yellow Brick Roads Are Fading
Toto Wont Keep You Warm
The Lion Isnt So Friendly
Tin Man Brings You Harm"
^^^ Love this stanza, nicely worded!

Sad and an incredible feeling of loneliness. Deep and unqiue. Wonderfully done!!

Very very well written u have SUCH a way with words itsz amazing
always hOld ya head Up...
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Reading all your poems i really don't know how you do it. its like.. the words are so magically stringed together =( where do u get your inspirations from??? would you like to give me advice on some of minee?

Wow Nikki beautifully written with an important message. I love the flow and all the references to fairy tales. lovely job, love ya
JL

Wow! that was an amazing poem. truly one of the best i've read today. 5/5 ~ash

Oh my gawd. sheesh, you are like AMAZING. ya, u r in my favs and this was like one of the only times i check this site anymore, but wowsers. this poem is liek really good. u should keep writign, cos u def have talent. g2g
bye
asian luv alwayz, thao anh mai

This poem is so original and well written. I loved the details, and the title "Hallucinating Hearts". I also loved the ending, I think it's a very strong stanza.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby