It is short too much meaning full

It’s good, I would recommend it is a bit short and has too much power to not add to I think you could really do wonders with this if you built on it... but that’s just my opinion :)

Short but tasty, lol

I sort of understand what you are saying here. It would be even more awsome if there was more to the poem describing the pain.

Wow i guess little wordz is more powerful than a whole page

This poem is short but holds soo much meaning. i like it.