Hey good poem! don't feel bad thats men for ya they always try to bring you down and they may say nasty things to hurt you but the only reason they do it is b/c they want you to feel like you can't do better than them they're afraide you might find sum one else just keep ya head up and if he ain't given u the luv you need you need to leave b 4 its 2 late.

I liked it.. i cud understand the feelings as a reader and it shows the fact that u cant reli stop loving the perosn uve loved b4, even if they hurt u.. i cud totally relate.. tho not entirely in that sense.. anywayz.. gud poem, i reli liked it
keep goin
take care
NannO

This was really good.. It had alot of emotion in it and it's something that I can definitely relate to. You chose your words well and really let out your emotions in this. Great job on this, it sounds like it came straight from your heart.

It was super and I loved how you expressed your feelings. I think it deserves a 5 for deffinate. I could tell how you felt and the choice of words was good too.

Great poem, I could definately feel what you were trying to say here, in fact most can. It's such a common loathed situation, but you turned it into something magically emotional. Keep it up!

Awwwwwwww hun such a heart touchin piece my eyes filled with tears i can really really relate to this poem.
top marks 5/5.
keepup the good work hunnie.

gema xoxoxox

Augggghhh , I hate those feellings. :\ I hope everything's improved for you.

I seriously wish that i could leave you a longer comment than this, but i dont think i can sit here any longer, i have to go read a new poem, i cant stand that poem....but let out the anger thats probably boiling up inside you right now, because its in a good way! i can relate like 167% to that... it took my breath away, it is sooo amazing i loved it - it brought up lots of old thoughts!

**meggie**

I seriously wish that i could leave you a longer comment than this, but i dont think i can sit here any longer, i have to go read a new poem, i cant stand that poem....but let out the anger thats probably boiling up inside you right now, because its in a good way! i can relate like 167% to that... it took my breath away, it is sooo amazing i loved it - it brought up lots of old thoughts!

**meggie**

Aww di s is such a sad poem! sumtimes it gets soo tuff 2 get over sum1! its like u kno u shud get over him bt like u jus dnt hav control over ur own heart! gr8 poem!

Aww....So sad..
I hope your ok..All your poems seem to be so sad.. :(
GOOD! VERY GOOD! but still sad...

Jen

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