I like the simple things and you've said your words very well. I like it.

Yes....very short but with lots of meaning. Very well done!!

No Harm Done!...I Found That Some Of My Best Poems Were Written In Class When I Was Suppose To Be Paying Attention

In This Poem My Favorite Part Would Have To Be How You Wrapped It Up In The End...As a Poet I Feel The Most Important Part Of a Poem Is The Beginning And The End (With a Smooth Middle Of Course) "you're my other half, with you I'm whole" That Line Was a Stroke Of Genius...5/5

xoxo-Nikki-xoxo