Wow.. how could someone give you a three for that! it was great! i loved it! :) it flowed perfectly, like those words were meant to be together, and i loved it!
jessy xox

I agree with Jessy, you definitely got downvoted. I'll try and bump you up ;)

Life is one huge struggle, just as you described it.
I have some corrections, in first stanza line three, and fourth stanza line one, it should be "you're."
The rhyme was good, but a tad predictable. Think about using more creative vocab, www.thesaurus.com is good for that!
Good job overall, keep writing.

It was a bit predictable yes, especially when I know you can make more creative poems then this one. Life is a struggle to decide what is right or wrong and to express either our happiness or cover our sadness.

That's a great poem. Keep up the good work.

This poem was written on a very true level, and i'm sure many ppl can relate to this. You have very good formatting with this, which makes your rhyming great. Everything about this poem was amazing. I loved the emotional feel, great poem. 5/5

Great flow and a well expressed concept. slight grammatical error in the last stanza "your " should be "you're" other than that though a great peice of writting

I really like the way you wrote. I have same feelings right now. I can easily imagine it and that is very good poem.

Perty good ryming

I luv this poem! i kno exactly wut u mean. i wish i cud rite like u. chek out sum of my stuff if u get a chance

~N ! 1< 0~

Great poem!

5.5

I like this a lot.

You have managed to capture your true feelings and write them down to create something magical. I thought it was great!!

5/5 ya are good!!!

Wow! i really liked that... wow i wish i could right like that... check my stuff out and tell me what you think

Wow! i really liked that... wow i wish i could right like that... check my stuff out and tell me what you think

Well, I think that everyone has days like that. When they just cant deside, on stupid things. Or whether or not they hate who they are, or love who they are. But not very many ppl love who they are, anyways. Good job, I really liked this one

I love this poem, its really good, and i can definitely relate at the moment. sometimes everything just seems so hard, i'm sure you'll work it out, give it time xxx

Hey this was real good. i can relate to it a lot rightnow. keep up the good work. 5/5