Aw, Spud. Lovely poem! 5/5
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It's like your writing off the top of your head the way your feelings are expressed so clearly... yet the rhyming scheme is still spectacular. 5/5 great poem

Ooo i totally like it keep up the good work~brittness

WoW!! thats somehow very deep ina lovey sort of way i realy liked it you can compare alot with me in this poem lol i lvoe it so nice and gentle i love the way u described your feelings and you tryed to let it go i feel like im in your shoes it seem like its happen to me good goign xoxroxyxox

Very deep-it really moved me.....

keep it up hunni

october xx

Thats great wow!! i just realised i commented this poem as my old name (roxy) lol cool
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