Nicely written. It's a good poem. Keep writing!

Very Nice Poem Dear. The flow, rythym and words choices where perfect. Great Job.

The fight for numbness isnt always the key to letting go.... not that i drink or anything but i grew up with my dad alwyas drinking, and well my mom liked to feel tipsy... and since my mom went to the angels, my older bro did the same.... im not here to preach, just saing that drinking may make u feel nice and numb, but the pain is still there, dont hide from it, just let it come

Wow nice job... but sometimes feeling numb is worse than feeling anything at all

Yeah.. alcohol never solved any problems, it just makes things worst. This was a really good poem, it had a good flow and the rhymes were great. A sad and powerful poem. 5/5

It was really deep and I like how the story progressed to the end. 5/5

Really nice ideas portried here! great job : ) my only critisism would be stanza 5 where you have repeated the words 'my self' and in stanza 6 where it didn't flow as well as the rest of the peom but overall a fantastic poem
Aaron (remo)

I'm appauled at the beauty of this poem, you wrote it very well.
best wishes
God Bless
Renee

Omg hunni this is amazing i love it sooo much urs soo talented.....5/5...babes keep it up xxx

I feel exactly like this sometimes......Great work...I love someone who can say exactly how I feel....5/5