Aww.. thats so sad.. :( great poem with lotsa emotion and it flowed well.. keep up the excellent work! 5/5
jessy xox

GOD, Sarah....
GOD GOD GOD. You're amazing. You know that? Simply FANTASTIC!! The flow was FLAWLESS and perfectly executed! You nailed this RIGHT ON THE HEAD! GOSSSSSSSH!

This is an awfully sad poem. It took effort not to cry reading this. Any poem that can effect my emotions is good. Well done.

Great poem..i loved it, good topic with great rhyming....5/5 for sure.

keep up the great poetry

Really sad, beautiful ryhme, once again excellent work your doing wonderfullly! thank you for letting me read it, i loved it

keep the faith keep the talent keep the ability to write beautifuly

Laura