True Love.

by sfiawong   May 20, 2006


Title: True Love
By: sfiawong

Love is rainbow
Love is power
Love is wonderful
Love is energy
Love is our needs

Without Love people will be unhappy
Without Love People will be ill
Without Love People will be Crazy
Without Love People will be sad
without Love people will be crying
Without Love what would you do?

People always say love can bring power, rainbow, and energy
Love bring natural, make us thinking, more wonderful in life
But how many people can get this kind of Love
Sometimes Love bring hurt in our love

God love us since thousands years ago
God teach us how to love someone even is our enemy
What do you want to say about Love?

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  • 17 years ago

    by sfiawong

    Love is so great in our heart,
    We can't mention all kinds,
    It is existing in every where,
    No matter in the whole world'
    Even in the space we can't describe.
    Not merely talking about you and me.
    We keep love can maintain the
    atmostphere good with peace.
    So we need love our families then
    love our country, love international places.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    I liked this poem a lot. With the repitition of what "love is" then what life would be like "without love" very good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    The final stanza is by far the best part of this peice, i'm afraid that i find the begining very repetitive... the last stanza, however, is very well written

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