Thats so cute! One of your better one's hon! I'm so proud of you! Yesterday you had no idea on even rhyming and now look at you! AMAZING! Keep writting hon

Much love
Bee

This one was cute, and for once it made more sense and did not try and be funny but simply was funny. I just suggest capitilizing your i's.

This peice is really good, it flows nicely and the rhymes seem very natural. i am not too keen on the use of 1 and 2 rather than "one" and "two" but that is no big deal just a personal dislike lol.

overal great peice

5/5

Awww that made me smile =)

Keep up the good work.

love kate xx

YAY Darling you made the top list on funny poems! GAH I'm so proud of you! lol Don't we remember "Brigitte what the heck rhymes with happy?" and every three seconds calling my house "Brigitte! i got a new line written!" LoL And now look at you!! My little baby poet!

Love you hon
Bee

That was fab!
And it was so sweet!
Well done!
5/5!
*Gem*

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's really cute. Good job!

Really cute i would sing it to my kids! hehe

well done
xxxxxxxxxx

I agree with everyone else, it's adorable! >.

Haha thats REALLY cute i know im alittle old to be liking these poems but i REALLY like that lol....comment my poems sometime...
---Alexis

That was really cute

JUST CUTE!!!...THIS IS A CUTE POEM