My Mountain (Haiku)

Frankly I liked it alot. I is so hard to write a haiku. You did bend the rules though. But I'm glad you did.

-ifihide11

This poem was just okay for me, i guess i dont really like he Haiku style!!! But u did capture the sadness with jsut 3 lines!! good job!!! 4/5

Nice and simple

I feel like your haiku would gain more if you didn't use the first person at all. I think one of the beautiful things that haikus can accomplish is a implicit connection between nature and man. This haiku, on the other hand, made that connection explicit. By simply talking about the mountain's loneliness, you could imply to the reader that you are lonely as well.

It looks not very likely a haiku.
but I like your concept. You seemed so lonely requesting someone sit with you. Good message.