Its really an beautiful poem, burning desire for love could be felt in each and every word, this poem of urs carries wind of love with it, moment u read it...u r blown away.
beautiful poem and very diff from ur complete collection so far.
Awwww this is just cute!!!
lol, yeeh we hv almost same tittles!
anyway your poem was truly amazing and wonderfully written!
I love readin every poem that u write they put a smile on my face
you're truly an amazing writer!
keep up this talent
Girl, I can totally relate to this! You're falling for him, and you don't even know him...and when you fall, you fall hard. This exact thing happened to me. You yearn for him to look at you just once more, but at the same time, you don't want him to cuz you know it's gonna hurt (i don't know if that's what was in the poem, but that's how i felt when it happened to me :) ) Wonderful poem, I loved all of it!!!! You are a fantastic writer...you are in my faves!!! ;) Keep up the good work, and thanks for the comment on my poem! Much love, Ashley