Great imagry in this peice, well written with some good vocab choice. the descriptions are vivid and really add to the overall peice well.

5/5

Catchy beginning, great ending. A very good non-rhyme poem. Very powerful yet peaceful at the same time

I really liked the poem it was good

much love

marlena

Every poem you write just amzes me! I really like this poem and expsecialy this line

Twas another storm brewing
without consent from sky.

Idk why but it really created an image for me! Your the next shakespeare in the making! I love how you used old english as well! Very nice!

Majestic and beautiful, I really loved the imagery and it just captured me from the first phrase. A wonderful write!

Wonderful Poem. I felt as if everything in the poem was happening.. I loved the begining, and jsut adored the ending. Great Job.

Wow. You have an excellent way with words. I think your poem was beautiful. I give it 5/5. Great imagination, flow, and over all tone.

Wow.. your poems all just make me go "woahhh.." lol.. they are so great! i loved this poem! and the name really draws poeple in! keep it up!

The imagery is just beautiful... A very impressive poem. A spectacly I am pleased to have seen. Your works always impress me and this one is beautifully done. Great work :)

What a gentle and a beautiful write. You had a great flow of words in this especially in the first stanza. I liked the repetition of "twas" at the beginning of each stanza. Lovely ending too.

Nice poem... 5/5

I love it !! i hope u will continue writing good ones like this one

Vrry good, it seems well thought through. i love the content and the rhytm, dont change a thing this is a vry nice poem...keep it up hun.

Lissa

I liked this poem, havent read one like it...keep writing!

That last stanza was awesome. Lady of the sea.. A really good title, Stands out alot. The poem though, Wow, You're just really good. Never stop writing kay. I LOVE your work. This piece deserves 5/5 It was brillant just like your other work!

`taleee xx

Wow, this is fantastic. it had a great flow to it and was gentle. the images created in my head were beautiful
xxx

Hello!
I really like this poem..
It`s some kind of magical:)

Love the imagery, great job.