A simpler poem to your others i have read.
i still good though.
Reminds me alot of the poems i often find myself writting. though yours are alot better.

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Wow, that is a really powerful piece, It seemed to capture the intensity and rawness of true love, I loved the brutality and truth within this piece for when you have given your all to someone you have nothing left of yourself as our worth is determined by our spirit and not our material posessions . In this world people are so blinded by their own self-importance and self-worth they forget to look atound them and see that the most fundamental things are missing from their lives such as love and compassion and a genuine care and concern for another person.